Our Horror Opening “HUNTED” Pitch

Below is showing the PowerPoint that we created as a group we used to deliver our Horror Opening ideas to the class, expressing how we wanted our film to be and what is consisted of. Gaining possible feedback's from our peers to see if them as our target audience suggested anything to be improved to make this a good opening film and being suitable for their age range...

Responses from our audience: 

From looking at the responses that we gained from presenting our pitch to the class we can see that most of the comments that we were given back was that our opening is going to be a solid opening, with great ideas and a good choice of using the inspiration that we gained our ideas from leading to create our ideas for the opening. When gaining the feedback from our Pitch to the class we gained positive feedback about where we wanted to base our opening in "Tydd St Giles" at the Church/Graveyard. Also we gained most comments about how we linked in the props, costumes for our characters and how these ideas linked in with the Slogan "The past Never Lets Go" which they approved how we decided to approach this.

When we decided to show the target audience to the group they liked and agreed with who are audience age range should be "15 - 18" because of how we explained this would be a suitable age for them to understand the concept of the opening and the plot that it includes, so they liked also how we approached this.

However when looking at the responses that we gained after presenting our Pitch of our opening ideas we did gain some possible improvements that we can make during our ideas. Which these were to make the male character more sinister towards the audience. However, when discussing this within the group we have decided to make the male character more sinister as he is going to be a shadow like person to make him seem more scary and unknown towards the audience but at the same time being able not to see the character clothes making him look more silhouette and more dangerous to the audience creating the paranormal aspect of him being a shadow, but still thinking about the unknown Idea.

Overall: The feedback that we gained from our Pitch of ideas was outstanding this was because people liked our ideas and they believed that it is a solid opening that we be more watched to be viewed and only had one possible improvement about the male character which as a group we have decided to make the changes to this of making him more of a shadow. So therefore overall outstanding feedback's from our Pitch ideas so we know we have created a successful opening however with only little improvement. 

Here are some Quotes from our Audience Responses: 

"Well thought through, and explained in detail, it has been influenced your inspiration." - Bethany Edwards

"The inspiration is good and also meets the current trend in horror films" - Jack Hepting

"The conjuring is a great film to base a horror movie on also the YouTube clip, very similar to your ideas." - Tyler Mattless

Overall Assessment on Our Group Pitch:

The overall assessment for our Pitch I believe was outstanding and was successful for how planned it to be for outcome...

This was because looking at the ideas that we wanted to get across towards the audience we can see that this went well and be delivered our ideas with success. This was because looking at the feedback that we gained and how we wanted to try and include everything we needed to say to make out Pitch and ideas stand out towards the audience and make it successful enough for our ideas to be agreed with.

The Main idea of creating and delivering this Pitch to the audience was because we needed to know that our plans for our opening was good enough to create so having the feedback ensured that we was heading towards the right stepping stones into creating our horror opening "Hunted" However, when having this feedback we was able to be able to see the improvements that they wanted us to have we only needed to make our male character more sinister and as a group we shall be doing that by making him more of a shadow character, creating that tension for the audience, so by only seeing one improvements by the peers it shows that our ideas for our horror opening is going to be a solid piece of work and will become successful. So therefore, from looking at the Pitch we can see that our horror opening will work and by gaining the audience feedback we can see that this will work and we shall continue with these ideas.