AS Media Feedback

Focus: Blog Feedback Missing Posts: None

Level and Mark: Level 3 – 14

WWW - You have some fantastic posts that cover a brilliant amount of detail. You analyse in a very succinct and yet detailed way with some very sophisticated ideas as well. You have organised your posts well and have very detailed research into the many aspects of your genre and options for your task. Your analysis of colour is superb throughout your blog.

EBI - Try to use a larger range of ICT to present on your blogs, consider the use of audio or video clips of yourself explaining some of the key ideas. Consider as many multiple meanings in regards to the type of clothing that characters wear. What could it show about them and why is it used? Think in more depth about the type of text that is used and the connotations it creates for the reader.

Resulting Actions  (student response): Since this feedback, I have started to use different ICT Software’s Like Prezi and making images on PowerPoint and inserting them into my blog posts. I have explained why certain things have been used within my posts. Many Improvements have been done in future work I shall look over my past ones.